You owe me 3 minutes...
Review:
This is not front page worthy. Sound - 0, Animation - 2, Story - 0. I know this is your first try at flash, and I am sorry to have to tell you, but it is really bad.
Advise:
Don't let these reviews get you too down.
The easiest and best way to get better is to spend time with other flash artists, you will learn tricks you might not figure out on your own, plus talking shop will get you excited about what you're doing. Also, ALWAYS have someone proofread a script before you spend time and energy animating it. as for sound quality, just invest in a decent mic. talk to someone at Best Buy or Radio Shack, they will help you find a good mic for a good price.
Don't let this be your last attempt at flash, Every first is the worst.